楼主很热心呀,为了不让别人轻视中国人,某些地方还需要改进一些.
we are avast fans,we love avast so much,but beta version has so many bugs,for example(for example后面一般需要逗号,接一个例子,如果是列举事物的话可以用such as) quarantine,false positives(如果是2样事物,可以使用and来连接,不需要逗号) can not be restored,and behavioral protection does not work now?(and前面和后面都是一个否定句,不是疑问句,不需要问号)so i pretty need a released version,i represent chinese groups of users,in china(加个逗号或放句尾) avast is so pop.and avast could never let us down,i believe that this time it's the same.......We are expecting released version without so many bugs..the last question,When will the work be complete(动词需要注意时态)?next week?next month?we need the scheduled dates... thanks.have a good weekend.
就算i忘记大写,China和Chinese不该小写.
前面部分句子有点长,一直都是逗号,用多些句号就容易理解点.
"i represent chinese groups of users"说自己是代表不是很好,可以在陈述观点后说:"在中国还有很多和我有相似想法的人" |
楼主: chenleqiu123
发表于 2009-11-15 12:50:49
明年用吧
