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那个不是没有连接动词，而是跟着前半句there be句式，as做因为理解

-oAo-

w867057887 发表于 2011-4-5 10:10
我用谷歌翻译

我也用谷歌翻译

Dirk

I just wanna say that even the improved version you provided has some mistakes.
And there is no problem with the English on the website. The real problem is your own understanding.

Sometimes people believe that knowing English means knowing how to translate. It's not the fact, though. You lack the sense of the whole text and context, thus not being a good reader, let alone translator.

a13828565410

直接英文党。。。大学还要过四级啊

viruskiller123

回复 33楼 Dirk 的帖子

Well actually, what about you? :)
Can you be more specific about my mistakes? Can you give me more example for just improve my text? :)

Dirk

viruskiller123 发表于 2011-4-6 03:39
回复 33楼 Dirk 的帖子

Well actually, what about you? :)

Before correcting your improved version, I first need to pick out the problems in your reply.
"Can you give me more examples to just improve my text"   
Context cannot be improved.  Pay attention to your collocation.

I'm also curious why a person abroad will pick out problems with Chinese grammatical terms? Are you really abroad?

viruskiller123

回复 36楼 Dirk 的帖子

At least this kind of English are allowed in the United States~
What so ever, you speak English pretty nice. I am glad to have pal just like you:)

viruskiller123

回复 36楼 Dirk 的帖子

So you think that I'm not abroad? Isn't?Well, please take a look at this:

Dirk

回复 38楼 viruskiller123 的帖子

No, I'm just curious.
I understand oral English does not concern too much on grammar. It's true.
I was just wondering why you still use those Chinese grammatical items when you're in the US already.
You must be a student studying there?

viruskiller123

回复 39楼 Dirk 的帖子

Well actually, I was a immigrant who move into the United States few years ago.
At that time I think I was only like 12...